Wow this is rally sad....i think we have something in commin about your peotry...well it was really good...

~jenn~

Very sad poem but well writeen...keep up the good work

Very sadd..but very well written..
enjoyed how it flowd well and the phrase "alone in the room" was repeated.
5/5

I echo others words and see the sadness in this.

However you created something quite beautiful in its wake.

Craig