OOo what a beautiful poem and so optimistic i love it ^_^. I could picture everything as i was reading so you're obviously a very talented writer. 5/5

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Another great poem..you have a really good talent for writing
keep it up.
<3

Wow this is really good.it makes u really think about where u stand in life.i wish we could all just live in that happy place.i think this is a really good poem though.

Oh my god. That poem was AMAZING!!!!
I could picture it perfectly in my mind.
and i agree with abel. i love the last 3 lines.
Great job!!!! <3 5/5
-Liz

This is a great poem i luved it

Awsome 5/5

Hmmm you are really good at describing your heart. Keep it up...........!!!!!!!!!

This has an amazing flow.
So many memories have been and gone through here
But somehow lives within it
I feel so connected with this place
As if i have been here before
I feel so blissful so happy

that stanza i think made the poem as great as it is! you used strong words good job!

Awesome!!!!!....i bet u've a very unique philosphy in ur life simliar 2 those lines..