Good title, i like this poem its very well written xxx

"You are drifting further away
feeding day after day on your pain
But never once do I hear you say
by all of this what you have to gain"

This is so sad and heartbreaking, but you portrayed the emotions perfectly.

"Try as I might though
my voice is all but silent
Standing on the edge you go to show
the promise of death is more than a glint"

Entrancing words, this really is interesting.

"As you take the plunge head first
into that imagined promise land
My pain, anguish, and hatred come in a burst
but for you and relief I fully understand"

Great way to end this piece, really left me astonished. Good write, a very heartfelt deep poem. Keep writing, always and forever....

Awesomeness.
You && a poet named Taymos are my favorites to read on here.
Keep up the magnificent work.

Thanks for all the comments. I haven't really found anyone on here that has had me on their favorites in a long time.

I keep all of my newer stuff on my allpoetry.com account.

My username is hatsuharu01 if anyone wants to check my new stuff out there.