Beautiful ,touched my heart.

Memories returning
Walking hand in hand
Dreams of tranquil beaches
Love waits in promised land.

Beautiful sad penned....yet well expressive emotions, "sometimes life's like a cloud." we don't know what will be happen....

And as we see the rootless stock
Retain some sap, and spring a while,
Yet quickly prove a lifeless block
Because the root doth life beguile,
So lives desire which hope hath left,
As twilight shines when sun is rest.

All the best for you and yours, take care. Hugs. Bert.

Love the imagery of this piece cindy, the complex wording and flawless flow make this a perfect 5/5, superb poem, keep it up!!!

my fav stanza is the last

Memories returning
Walking hand in hand
Dreams of tranquil beaches
Love waits in promised land

keep them coming!!!

I like the imagery in this piece. The descriptions are nice and the consecutive rhymes go with the poem well.

Your poems reflect your creativity and versatility. Tc

With love
Fsams

Very touching,how true to the soul.take care and god bless.

Beautiful beyond words! 5/5

Memories returning
Walking hand in hand
Dreams of tranquil beaches
Love waits in promised land

So beautiful....images of Heaven.....paints a glorious picture .....

Wonderfull, and excellent piece of work.
i loved the last stanza.. takecare

you deserve 5/5

Miss Cindy, this is a stunning, poetical success. Not only were the images conjured by your words appealingly relaxing, but its words also brought exceeding emotions, which apparently were gurgling throughout the page. How you've weaved your this piece in such an elegant and graceful manner, along with a slightly plaintive atmosphere, further fascinates me.

"Sadness searing mind
Tears flood a lonely heart
Souls torn asunder
Briefly ripped apart

Carried on a breeze
Echoing in my ears
Your words of forever
Music for me to hear"

The foregoing stanzas are my favorites; in fact, they made me connect to a certain time of my life, which I find bittersweet and quite nostalgic. Nevertheless, it's definitely one of your masterpieces. I'm certain of it. Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care!

Love,
Debbie

Whoops. How you've weaved your words in this piece, I mean, particularly fascinates me. :) My apologies for the double post.

Great poem.
Like the flow and the words you chose.

" Sadness searing mind
Tears flood a lonely heart
Souls torn asunder
Briefly ripped apart "

My favourite stanza.
Again, a beautiful piece of writing.
Take care

Cindy, its sad but very beautifully written.Loved the ending most.

Take care
chavii.

So wonderfully written

Another beautiful poem my dear cindy, your words speak softly and inspire many to keep going xox sam

This is sad, haunting and beautiful. EXCELLENT JOB. The flow and word choice are great!!

This is so sad and beautiful at the same time. I'm almost speechless- this is worded perfectly, the rhyme flows nicely and packed with such images and emotions! Truly a great poem, Cindy.

Peace, Poetry & power,

Gary Jurechka