I like this poem. i like how it rhyms...i cant rhym so i give credit to those who can. i also like this because i have FELT like i was being drown. when i would have a day where everything would go wrong i felt like i was drowning and things wouldnt get any better.

Wow, beautifully written. Strong emotions. Great poem, you are very talented! Keep up the great work. I'd like to see more soon!

sweet_rebellion

Wow... I really liked that... it was sad and captured the moment...

Wow. thats very deep

This was really good. 5/5

Hidden meanings are great arent they?
I like how you would put the spoken person out of misery- drowning by misery and suffering?
cool