Awwww. omg. i was reading this to my friend over the phone and we both had the same reaction...its sooo sweet and it inspired this both. i love it.

***ayshley***

Wow what a lovely imagination,Love how you write it And the emotions too.And especially how u ended up the poem.GREAT JOB KEEP IT UP!!!

Yes thats reality fairytale i can very well relate to your poem 5/5

Aww this is so cute :) I can tell that you wrote this from your heart, well done. Flow was smooth, I like your choice of words. I really enjoyed it :) It's like reading a girl's mind xD Anyway keep up the good work!

5/5!

Thanks for the comment :) it made me smile :)