Good poem and i like your title too well done keep it up xxx

OOo i really like this poem...one of my favorites..i dont see why more people didnt comment/vote on it. my favorite parts ((though hard to pick)):

"You can hear my faint breath
The ones you used to take away"

and

"You once told me flaws were beautiful
Now they are nothing more than mistakes"

probably because i can relate to them so well...great job 5/5

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I like the poem

Gorgeous poem
it must suck what ur going thru
u can PM me wenever u wants
and keep it up
wonderful 5/5

xx

FABULOUS(5/5)
I am deeply touched to read your feelings in the words of this poem....Good work.
Please, read my poem "WHEN SOME ONE LEAVES FOR EVER" and rate it...You can rate it as you like,It will matter alot to me.
Love
Junaid

Heartfelt write , can relate, love is a killer

Don

Real good poem.

Beautiful. But somewhat sad once, I was very much in love with a woman I know was meant for me. At the time I was a terrible introvert and a few years later she died.