Comments : Mistakes

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good poem and i like your title too well done keep it up xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    OOo i really like this of my favorites..i dont see why more people didnt comment/vote on it. my favorite parts ((though hard to pick)):

    "You can hear my faint breath
    The ones you used to take away"


    "You once told me flaws were beautiful
    Now they are nothing more than mistakes"

    probably because i can relate to them so well...great job 5/5


  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I like the poem

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Gorgeous poem
    it must suck what ur going thru
    u can PM me wenever u wants
    and keep it up
    wonderful 5/5


  • 15 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    I am deeply touched to read your feelings in the words of this poem....Good work.
    Please, read my poem "WHEN SOME ONE LEAVES FOR EVER" and rate it...You can rate it as you like,It will matter alot to me.

  • 10 years ago

    by don

    Heartfelt write , can relate, love is a killer


  • 9 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Real good poem.

  • 4 years ago

    by Glenn G

    Beautiful. But somewhat sad once, I was very much in love with a woman I know was meant for me. At the time I was a terrible introvert and a few years later she died.