Oh my god

that was amazing you are so talented and your partner tis lucky lol
keep writing it was a really good piece its one of my favourite poems now :)

well done

Girl you can write!! great poem. full of passion and excitement. I love the way in which you share your experience with the writer... great job 5/5

This is just amaizeing... such beautiful work...
-Marina 5/5

Wow that was good um you can almost feel the emotion lol it had me intreged keep up the good work i look forward to reading more of your work 5/5

WHOA!! very detailed but i like

Very tense great job

-love whitney-

This a good one..it not like really explict...but in a way it is...its very seductive..i like it
=]
5/5

That is excellent,it rhymes in some places,its amazing,looks like you had fun.lol
x

Wow ... im just speechless O_O that was very very good =]

Really amazing

greatly put into words

Wow... I could almost picture myself there with ya! Excellent imagery.

Nice one... alot of passion great job!