I enjoyed the poem
this is a good example of why you shouldnt throw old poems out
I find them all the time, and i keep them in a binder

i like the ideas behind it

please check out my poem Kryptonite when you get the chance (rate/comment)

Actually this poem isnt all that bad..i think its pretty good..maybe add a little more to it but its ok just the way it is..good job!

~Michelle~

I agree with invisibilty pad it out add more to it and it would be a great poem is the message about fate or just that particular moment maybe? well done anyway