I give it a yeay lol good job i like this poem it has that love touch but of course the best part the depressing part lol good job and thx for reading my poem::):)

keenan

I like this poem cause I know what you felt when you wrote it.Keep on the good work and congratulations.......you're a good poet. Michelle *hugs*hugs* XXX

Ohh i really like it and its very touching especially when it comes to the depressing part =)

I love the poem good work.. very touching and you should keep writin let the emotions flow through you into your poetry and the greatness will ensue

I REALLY REALLY like this poem...i can connect with it...& it is so wonderfully written!! i can tell that you just let loose and didnt think too hard about what you were writing and it flows PERFECTLY!!!! 5/5!!! :)

First off thanks for the comment on mine. yes every woman in my family went through that and i did one time. But that one time he also walked away with a busted nose (i lie you not) So i'm the one that doesn't stand for it and i'm trying to show the younger generation of my siblings that they too, should stand up for themselves and let no man try and run over them.
~*~Anywho~*~
this was a really great poem. I loved the imagery and i love the emotion. I give it a YAY lol it was really good. and what do you mean you actually tried??? i'd like to read something you haven't tried on and see how good it is lol you're really good. Keep writing and never give up. i hope to read more from you.....and keep me posted on your new stuff and keep a check up on mine lol
thanks :)
~*~Amber~*~

This is amazing hun! It's one of my top faves<3 I can totally relate...well not at the moment but ive felt exactly like that! you're so talented wifey<3