Comments : Michael (acrostic)

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Its so cute, i like it. i used my partners name aswell but you read that. nice work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a great poem ^_^ I like it, The opening line grabs the reader's attention and the ending was a perfect. It sums up the emotions in the poem :) good job!

    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Hahaha, I actually find this Acrostic particularly sweet and cute. Not only was writing an Acrostic fun to do, but it also is quite nifty and lovely and endearing to read. It's a nice tribute for the one you dearly cherished in your heart, m'dear. =] I hope you all the best and take care!

    Love,
    Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a sweet poem.
    Especially the first line is great.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awww...short and sweet....

    i liked it. 5/5

    ~Michelle~

  • 16 years ago

    by X2892

    Cute poem it was good but the other one was better but still 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Zima Ultifera

    Nice poem gitje :D
    But i allways say that of your work :D
    Not becouse were friends, couse in here im Zima, a not friend? Blegh nah just another me who ca be an arse on bad poems imo (A)
    But this one is fun, cute and very sweet :D
    Yay ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Now this poem is cute!! I really liked it...I hope Micheal liked it too....

    Overall 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww very cute and very good
    I loved how you rhymed it too most don't
    nice job
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    Awww, I stumbled across this poem and It is so coote!! lol ,I couldnt help but comment its just so sweet! tee hee xx