Excellent poem , wonderfully written very heartfelt as always a pleasure to read, I really enjoyed this one ,thanks for sharing , your friend Tracy d

Beautiful...... very beautiful........
words that touch my soul

Debbie
what a beautifully breath taking piece. You can feel the longing of your heart.
Soon Deb very soon :)
Love you Cindy

Beautiful poems, simply but you expressive them Lovely emotions, ah... something for somewhere,

i enjoy my visit here, keep them coming, take care. Bert.

Miss Debbie,

This was a tantalizing, stunning success, as always. Tear-jerking sentiments were gurgling throughout the page, and the poem itself was too gorgeous and too wonderful for words. I had reread it twice or thrice and still was utterly captivated by it. Poignantly written to say the least. xD All the best and take care!

Love,
Debbie

Very good movement within the reader

Very powerful and very meaningful, this poem was great. well written so i can relate, 5/5
-lorenzo

Wow, this is amazing. when i read this my jaw dropped. keep it up.

Great Poem Debbie,, keep it up. 5/5

A beautiful poem:)

Suh a beautiful poem, the words flowed so freely.

I LOVE THIS! :D

Nice words...haha keep it up

Very beautifully penned. Flow and word choice are wonderful! ~~clap~~~clap~~~clap~~~clap~~~clap~~

This was brilliant.. I don't know how else to put it, touched me deeply 5/5

That's so sweet and awsum how it all fits together. I <3 it

Fill me up with your every word........
You are so beautiful........