Umm the last stanza really didnt flow but it was still a good poem idk but its just me tat last stanza kinda stuck out

I think this poem is really good...its short but has alot of meaning behind it..its like you can feel the pain as your reading it....maybe you should add on to it and as you add continue in stanzas..but great poem...5/5

~michelle~

Love it,short and to the point 5/5

~Amber~

Short. Simple. Slightly cliche... Loved it. ;)

Short. Simple. Slightly cliche... Loved it. ;)

It was short but you got the point across. i understand what you mean in this, and you expressed quite well. i thought it was nicely done. 5/5