Wow. what can i say, it was beautifully written. you can tell that when you write, it comes straight from the heart. the way you describe the words just brings such a strong picture in my mind. awesome write. 5/5

This poem had a very dark tone to it up until the last few stanzas...so it was a very nice lead it to the message that you were trying to portray...id maybe watch the flow, because there was a few stanzas that didnt fit the others..but other than that, it was was an excellent write, keep up the great work

I honestly think it's beautiful. It's very heartfelt and I can really relate as I'm sure many people can... I really do love this poem... not saying it's perfect but the emotion and everything is great and I love it! Keep up the amazing work... it really shows that there is a lot of emotion and meaning put into this poem... 5/5!! Keep writing!