Comments : Turn Around and Take a Look (Contest)

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    Love your poem real sweet i hope you win you are a very talented writer and i really enjoy reading your work and commenting 5/5 Steve

  • 16 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    All i have to say is WOW!!! your an awesome writer!! i realy could feel the emotion!! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Mr Simon

    Interesting poem, though I'm not entirely sure if the message was clear enough for some of us more daft readers haha.

    I suppose the rest of the Auzzies are out there drinking and dmaging bain cells instead of writing poetry!

    Not much to add to this poem, probably might have used the word Void instead of 'hole in the ground' for a more poetic effect :).