Uhm this reminded me of the song 'Seven Black Roses.' Because the story behind it is similar. Er.. Nevermind xD

Anyway Flow was smooth, It was a great poem, I like the message in it. Keep up the good work!

Great flow n well written like it a lot n i still give it a 5/5 keep it up :-)

This was a real good poem but if there was one thing i could suggest it would be the use of commas. Especially in the first couplet, the second line should have a comma after "You patched p my heart". a great poem nonetheless.

5/5

Lovely poem. Beautiful and sad. Well formatted and simple rhymes are beneficial here making it all the easier to read. The one mistake I noticed was in line two it should be 'torn' instead of 'teared'. Otherwise excellent.

I think you did this for my contest, i still love it, it is beautifully expressed, the way you took the red rose and turned it black. nicely penned 5/5

I like it more than I like it :) 5/5