Comments : Roll Over Beethoven

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this one, Definitly the best one I have read from you today, I'm a big music fan so it was good to see a poem such as this being written. I loved the flow it seemed flawless to me. Everything about this amazed me. Keep up the great work with producing poems such as this wonderful read. 5/5~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Omg, it was so nicely penned... the flow was absolutely beautiful, the structure was great and the way it all just flowed together. 5/5

    The keys are pressed so lightly,
    Yet something magical is produced.
    It grips you in, takes full control,
    Like in the act of seduce.

    my fave line ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    In all likelihood to Mel, I myself am quite fond of listening to instrumental music, particularly the piano and the violin. In which case, this piece endears me completely. Not only was it a delightful read, but it also was strikingly gorgeous. I further liked the thought you had brought into play, 'twas appealingly inspirational. Even Beethoven himself first started as ordinary, yet promising musician. :]

    "It could make anyone fall into a loving sleep,"
    `I think it would flow better if you omit the 'a' and/or 'could'. :]

    A pleasure to read, nevertheless. I have an enjoyable visit, as always. Keep it up!

    Best wishes,
    Marian