This was quite a sad piece, I found your word choice to be simple yet quite effective. Short but held alot of information throughout it. It was different and I must say pretty unique itself. I liked it none the less and think you did a great job portraying this piece. Well done~mel

Wow. it was beautifully written. i loved it, you have such a talent with your words, the way they all just go together is amazing, great work 5/5

5/5.

One poem worth reading when you feel the same way but have no words or emotions to express it.

Nicely done. I actually found this particular piece of yours quite tantalizing. Not only did the words flow effortlessly in such a classy manner, but the substance also portrayed an attention-grabbing truth. 'twas very poignant.

Best wishes,
Marian

LOVE this. Aaah, words can`t explain how much I love this. Every line spoke such bitter and heartfelt truth, great job, really. One of my favorites I`ve read in a long time. Not just by you, by everyone. ;]

5.5
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