Here i am

by Bug1219   Jul 15, 2007


Here i am
thinking about you
the thought of you is
constantly goin through my mind

Here i am
wishing you were here
hoping that i get
to see you again

Here i am
dreaming that maybe
one day you'll feel the
same way about me

Here i am
praying so many prayers
that you will one day you'll
just give me a chance...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Short and sweet :) i loved it 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Maybe it's plain but the emotions are great and maybe just like what is commented above you can add some more imagination to look more captivating.Anyway, Love it keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    You wrote a great sad love poem. :)
    It's short but strong. Nice flow too.
    And you ended your poem well.
    Good job. 5/5

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