This is a very good poem... great job

Once again you are an awesome writer maybe I will be as good as you one day 5/5 Steve

Another amazing poem from you... i really like it..the word usage is great and the flow is perfect..

"Exits smile with ecstasy,
The forbidden is secured.
Cruelty calls another pace,
Knowing you can't forget this place.
Prescribe me what I need."

^^i absolutely love this part...its amazing..

5/5

you're an awesome writer...keep it up.

I ADORE THIS POEM
it deffiantely my favourite it was sad and yet hppy i especially loved the first stanza
Shadows cast along this wall,
Forgotten moments of happy call.
In a moment I can slip away,
Without a bleeding memory to pay.
although i think the last line should ended in
left to pay