Ohh wow..i liked the emotive words you used and how u described love as a rope..it was brilliant:D
keep it up:D

Once again, really beautiful. I loved the metaphor. And once again I can totally relate.

Wow. i loved the emotions in this, the wording was great, the flow was great and i love the structure. it was amazing. you have such a talent. 5/5

"another strand goes,
joining other frayed feelings,"
Hey, I especially liked this line.
Is this poem about a current relationship or past one?
Greta xx

I like this one from the beginning to the end. You're very talented. Every stanza holds so much emotions and very powerful imagery.
Well done, 5/5.

I like this poem alot.I like how you used rope as a metaphor to explain how easy love can be broken.But hey you always gotta fight for love. ^_^ 5/5

<3Amber

I loved it a lot. it was really good.

mandy xx

Love this poem.
How you discribe love as a rope.
Emotional piece of writing.
Beautiful
Take care