This is a pretty good poem with a pretty good story.. nice job and nice flow and nice rhythm!! :)

Aww this is a really good powm, it was just th right length for the topic, and although it was short it was still very powerful. i loved it .. great right, i feel similar about an ex.. thats why i also think its good , co i can relate to it .. kep it up .. 5/5
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WOW, yea right now in my house i know there is a haunting presence and its ruining my life

and this is how i feel

but the rhyming was good and never seemed forced

i loved it, 5/5