Powerful reptition.
And what a great choice of lines to use.
'Yet you say we are just friends
Only pain and misery will come of this'
They continue to echo in my subconcience.
It flowed nicely. And the vocab was good.
I really enjoyed it.
Elaine.
*If you could please check out, my poem `The moon temptress.

Very great poem.. i know the feeling. this actually happend to me just the othe day.. exactly like u wote the poem.. wonderful job..maybe u can check out some of my feature poems plzz