Tis one of my favorite and fisrt styles i accomplished, and i think you did an excellent job at it, i give it a 5/5!!! keep up the new styles!!!

This was really good, it has a great meaning to it!! I like your creativity and everything, the words seemed so heart felt. You used "baby" the first time ever, wow:| lol, first time i saw that from you. But it was great!!!!!!

Hey Keenan so this is what you were trying to figure out ok that makes more sense now...I like it I have seen them somewhere before but I can't remember where..Well your is more interesting:)

Beck Bravo

This was a great poem, I love this style definitly one of my fav's. You portrayed such sweet emotions within the lines of this poem I thought it was really good and nicely written. Keep up the good work~mel