You dont think it is good, but i prove you wrong by saying it is an exellent poem that is so deep and emotional. you have done a great job dear. you are truly a talented poet...

I actually liked this one a lot!

it's simple, but very touching.
i like how you repeat the phrase "just a memory." the repitition really sticks the fact that all the nice things are just a memory in the reader's head.

good work =]

Memories. sometimes i'm glad that i have memories othertimes i hate them. it's so sad when ppl leave but memories are what makes it better and helps you get through.
i love how you putting a quote from the persona in it. it helps add authenticity. well done xoxo

Awww i really liked this poem, your feelings were clearly shown and i can relate, it is always heart breking to find that things are only now a memort, but in contrast to saying thta , id rather a memory than nothing! great write though very inspiring. keep your head up
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