The Better Half Of My Heart

by Rachel   Jul 17, 2007


Every touch of your skin on mine
Runs a shiver through my spine
And each time our eyes meet
I could swear my heart skips a beat
The words you whisper in my ear
Make goose bumps suddenly appear
And your eyes captivate me
To my heart they are the key
Your smile puts one on my face
And brings me to my happy place
The way you talk makes my want to cry
You make me feel as if I could fly
Whenever you make a mistake
You have an apology that couldn't be fake
You make me feel so good
In such a way I never thought I could
You're the magic in my life
And for you I will strife
I hope we'll never be apart
Cause you are the better half of my heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rey

    Wow. You have a ton of talent! keep writing...and i'd appreciate it if you would look at my newest poem titled "Love in the World"...thank a ton!

  • 16 years ago

    by Anna Ryan

    Aw! this is so cute! thankss for you comment :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ben

    A very lovely poem. I can see the love you have in the poem. 5/5

    Big Ben

  • 16 years ago

    by Hope

    Superb Job Rachel!! I love the poem, the way in which it flows, it feels so real, I love the emotions in which you evoke in me as the reader. Perefct ryhme scheme.. This is why ur one of my favourites. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    Hey thanks for my comments!! i really like this poem!! i can relate to it!!
    [*><*]AmBeR[*><*]

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