I like it. I love the rythm in it and the inspiration...

Please comment.
I wrote this b/c my bf just broke up with me.

Good rhyming!

I loved it. like Haley Austin said, love the rythm. good
5/5
rose<@>

I love it

I didn't really catch the rythm in it, I couldn't quite feel the flow, it was a good message sent out though but yeah it needs a bit of work