Comments : My Sunshine (Acrosstic)

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Aww Paula,you are so sweet. When I get the inspiration(sp?) I will definaltly(sp?) return the favour. :D
    Your such a great friend,
    Miranda

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Aww, very cute. it was nice of u to dedicate a poem.. the flow was nice and i senced the sweet emotion from this...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Miranda
    You sexy mouse!

    ^ LOL!! I can't tell you how much I loved reading that Elaine.. It was just so cute and funny, and calling your friend a mouse.. lol, you gotta love it!

    When what I read in this poem, Miranda is a good friend for you that you really care about and probably have a lot of fun with. It also came through that she wouldn't ever hurt you but will slap ya to get your silly mind back on track when it has strayed away. Which are what friends are for.. they're supposed to help you out when you're lost and confused.

    Great Job!! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~