Awww what a unique idea. its very sad though and i could feel all your emotions, a great write.. inspiaring! i loved the way that you turned a popluar topic (breacking up/ ost relastionship) into your own unique poem!
the only thing i will say is in th second stanza you wrote 'your turned down my love' i think it would read better if it said 'you turned down my love'.. maybe it was just a typing error.. i do it all the time lol.. but it was an amaing poem ! lovd it !!
Definatly a 5/5
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Awww what a unique idea. its very sad though and i could feel all your emotions, a great write.. inspiaring! i loved the way that you turned a popluar topic (breacking up/ ost relastionship) into your own unique poem!
the only thing i will say is in th second stanza you wrote 'your turned down my love' i think it would read better if it said 'you turned down my love'.. maybe it was just a typing error.. i do it all the time lol.. but it was an amaing poem ! lovd it !!
Definatly a 5/5
xXx

Sorry about the double post lol

Its pretty good, i get the idea your trying to express its sad and lonesome. but good.
<3 sarah

Wow i love it.U have putted all your words perfectly and really the emotions are great.And your imagination too, it was unique. Great job 5/5 keep it up

I like how you used "lens" in this. It fit really well. I love it

Wow, this poem was beautifuly written. Though it is sad I can't help but love the words you put into it! 5/5 Great job ^^

How quickly love can turn to hate , eh?
that seems to happen alot...
I like the conept of false pictures the most here- I see them frequently, and make them even more.
5/5

Thanx 4 the comment. i really like this poem. your work is really good :)