This is a fantastic poem, the imagery and flow are absolutely amazing throughout. The poem is very unique and starts of strong and only gets better as the reader goes on. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

Very dark and descriptive poetic i like im not usually into dark poems so you did well :) top notch

Interesting, but remember: keep the reader captivated. This really didn't do anything for me; no lines stuck out and I really didn't like the beginning.
Beginning and endings are very important; they make the most impression.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

Wow. this was interesting. it was very dark. the imagery and the flow was amazing. i never read a poem like this one. its greatly and uniquely written.

Such a rush I feel within my veins,
As I experience the final scene,
Laughing to myself as curtains close,
All dependence weaned.

Wow a nicely reviced piece. I loved this stanza. Truely amazing. Keep it up 5/5

Fsams