Comments : Silence.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I don't understand why is this poem so low- rated. I absolutely like everything about that. You created so vivid imagery, painted with darkness that is overwhelming. And the ending... I'm in awe...
    Brilliant piece of dark poetry.
    5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by Kate

    I like the rhyme within the poem. It adds another dark sort of appeal to the poem. It flows nicely as well.

    I like the portrayal of the dark. Lies folded within, its dark call, the connection to the raven. It works very nicely together and I like it.

    Evokes a deep sense of depression, being sucked into a darkness that is hard to escape where lies roam through your head and get lost.

    Interesting