Wow.This was absolutely breathtaking.I enjoyed it verrry much.

Wow.. i dont even have words for this.. its amazing. i love it. youre very good at this.. keep it up -X-amanda-X-

You have a great way with the way you put the words together. this poem is very good i loved reading it!!...

5/5
laura

I LOVE the way it's written the wording, the flow.
It all is perfect for this poem

5/5

Very unique. It really reminded of abstract art. It's so interesting how you basically just listed things off. 4.

I Like how you used art in this.
"Draw my memories, Paint my dilemmas"
When reading this first line, I started to wonder what those works of art might look like. Very mentally stimulating.

"rainbow of sad colors, mixed hues
framed sins, brink of emptiness"
Love how instead of coming up with different ways to just plainly say depression or sadness. You Described your feelings as a painting, helping me capture the painting I was wondering about in the beginning.

Masterpiece!
5/5
Jenn.