I like this poem a lot.Congratulations,you have done a great work.Best regards,Michelle XxX

Beautiful and deep work, bro! 5/5

Wow..you're a really gifted writer.It was so deep and powerful.I love it!

<3Amber

I it was a great poem, james.

mandy X

Great poem and yeah i would try my best =)
xx

What an Odd Interesting Situation that would be!
Oh, well, I would do whatever I could do. I mean there's always a solution for everything. right?
How about you James? :-? what would you do?

Wow, really powerful piece, I really like the repetition, it creates a sense of tension.
Well done, Greta xx

WOW! this is a really powerful poem ur really talented 5/5

You're really good... this poem really put me in the view of the writer (whether it was intended to be you i don't know) and it really made me think. I love it so much.. don't ever stop writing

Boi u cant teach me how to write like thit n e day lol....ahah show me ur ways!!
brilliant write as usual

keep it up
x

Great poem.
Really deep.
I think I would do whatever I can, my very best.
What about you?
Anyway, a great piece of writing.
Take care