The Poem have me thinking.. Um I love it.. that all I can say for now.

Maybe have more rhyming each stanza had the same rhyme. That bores me try a different scheme or free verse

Very good im not usually into world opinions but this was done so well i couldnt help but carry on reading...

This poem is amazing!
i love what its about, its so unique.
the flow is perfect
the rhythm is flawless
and im suprised you could rhyme all that without any seeming forced.
amazing job with this
5/5

~Sandra

Michael,
I'm truly amazed by this spectacular piece of poetry! The words, flow, everything. I cannot express in words how incredible this is! My favorite stanza was this one:

The root of evil that runs so deep
Where dirty creatures seem to creep
Under the skies that have to weep
While wisdom slowly falls asleep

I dunno why, but it really stood out to me.
This was a true pleasure to read, so keep it up! 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori