"Free me from my sins fill my cup
Lord, I have nowhere to go except up "
I especially love these two lines.. I love the message that you are sending to the reader. Umm I also like the way in which the poem flows the whole rhyme scheme thing. Great Job, you know I love your writing.

Shorta and sweet. A beautiful poem about life and very true piece. I loved the simple rhyming style.

Fsams

Shorta and sweet. A beautiful poem about life and very true piece. I loved the simple rhyming style.

Fsams

Shorta and sweet. A beautiful poem about life and very true piece. I loved the simple rhyming style.

Fsams

Shorta and sweet. A beautiful poem about life and very true piece. I loved the simple rhyming style.

Fsams

Shorta and sweet. A beautiful poem about life and very true piece. I loved the simple rhyming style.

Fsams

Shorta and sweet. A beautiful poem about life and very true piece. I loved the simple rhyming style.

Fsams

Shorta and sweet. A beautiful poem about life and very true piece. I loved the simple rhyming style.

Fsams

Shorta and sweet. A beautiful poem about life and very true piece. I loved the simple rhyming style.

Fsams

Shorta and sweet. A beautiful poem about life and very true piece. I loved the simple rhyming style.

Fsams

Shorta and sweet. A beautiful poem about life and very true piece. I loved the simple rhyming style.

Fsams

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