I Love this poem.. Mr. Nalley, youre my inspiration, youre a great poem. I love the usage of repetition, it gives the poem a certain fling to it..

WOW a different style this was simple and great i love the words Sir.. your a great poet like she said ... i cant say anything here extreme one ... I love how you combine those words great keep it up sir dont stop writing.... for us here

Niceeeeee! i really liked that

Uhhh wow.. i love how you bring everything back to its beggining, or like its oposite.. thats really neat.. good poem.. awesome work :)
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Great poem.
Great rhyming, great words.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Great poem.
Great rhyming, great words.
Loved reading it.
Take care

This looks so nice and neat lol. It really is a unique and beautiful poem. It holds a lot of truth and is very relatable.

marcella

Wow, awesome poem, and so true! Never stop writing, your poems are amazing! 5/5

Ahh - absolutely enchanting! The seeming symmetry portrayed by this piece caught my interest: it's simply delightful.