Comments : Broken eternity

  • 16 years ago

    by Bre

    I love this
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is very deep. You wrote this one excellently. Wording is amazing, topic is also great. I like atmosphere that you created, it is incredible.
    Well done, this one truly deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mo

    Hannah this is absolutely amazing! I honestly cant believe such beautiful work with such descriptive language and such brilliant structure and flow can possibly come from a 13 year old!!! You'll definitely excel in the things you want to do through languages and school. Keep writing my dear - you have won your way onto my favourites thats for sure. Brilliant job and definitely an interesting topic too.

    Mo
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow. this is pritty good. actually, its better than good <333

  • 16 years ago

    by XxbekkaxX

    I absoulty love this poem!! the depth and understanding of what you are writing about, its stupendous!!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    Have I told you that you've impressed me, yet?

  • 15 years ago

    by Fredy

    The way it was structured and how the words had a flow of their own, great job!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    A very beautifully written piece of work!! i love the emotion and the deepness of it all, keep it up!