Hey,
nice poem, I can see how much this 'person' means to you, I dont know if you based the poem on reality or just fiction, if it is real then i do hope that he takes you as his sweetheart, the flow in poem is some times a little rough, but good work 5/5
kisses stephanie

Another great poem...you know how to make poems flow so easily and make it enjoyable for the reader to read...keep it up!=]

Wow hun.. it's beautiful.. i can really relate to it only in my situation (if i get this poem right) i said goodbye, eventually he changed and now we're friends but saying goodbye was the best thing i did, even if at the time it was the hardest thing possible.. hope things work out XmwahX

That was beautiful babe i really felt ur pain, such good choice of words really powerful loved it :) 5/5 xxx

Hey,
you did a nice job on fixing the flow its much better now, great job girl, love the 4th stanza =)
kisses stephanie

I love it
ints wonderful-beautiflu you can relly fell the emotion - i know kindav know what you mean

Good job...check some of mine out sometime

God your breaking my heart just reading your sad poems...you can just tell that allof them mean so much to you. And that they are a piece of you....5/5

Cute, sad, and ironic.

i like it, from the begiinig to the end. nice

5/5

Gr3aT!