This was really beautiful. The effect this piece had over me was truely outstanding. Each word was deep and gave such a chilling and sad feeling. For a shorter piece it portrayed so much. Definitly amazing. ~Mel

"but there's no one around
just cold stone
and the heartbeat of my pen
slowly icing over"

I loved these lines and the way you refer to the concept of coldness and ice in this poem. That may not make sense but point blank I love this. : )

X

A most excellent poem, Melissa. The opening lines are terrific.

What a way with words!!
^human quilt^

^liquify
these winter feelings
into summer rain^

Very creative descriptions. Beautifully written.

Loneliness is a very sad emotion
and all I could think is if I could just
reach out and touch someone hold
someone anyone that it would all be
Ok again.
A sad read and an excellent write
thank you for sharing and write on,
Bogie