I like it it reminds me of when i first met my husband. it was feeled wit lots of emotions. keep up the good work

I like this..it's great for your first poem.
it's a wonderful write!
keep up the good work..and wlecome to the site. =]
--Viola

I really liked this poem, short sweet and described exactly how you feel. keep it up babe. check out a couple of mine let me kno what you think