Comments : A Few Notes Taken

  • 16 years ago

    by brianna

    Oh it was great!! i love it, i got great visual from that good job

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very romantic Douglass......nice....

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    This was such a great poem loved it 5/5 xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    I somewhat felt an occupational jealousy with this poem. How charming. Gosh, it took my breath away by the comely beauty it brought into life.

    "Note the days and nights that pass
    As you think on days yet born.
    Remember the light that my love has
    And our moon that never goes outworn."

    Ah! Lovely... Simply lovely, Mr. M... :) I'm utterly enchanted.