Comments : The Pearl

  • 12 years ago

    by brianna

    It was really sweet...i liked it, big words confuse me a bit, but good poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Hi Doug,

    Wonderful metehoric write. I had to read it a couple of times before I got the jest of it. Quite an unusual rhyme scheme too. Especidally loved these lines:

    "I didn't know how to pluck my spirit,
    But I found it much easier than I had thought
    For even the clam who labored to bear it
    Had felt the purity of my love, too."

    Very well done. Beautiful rhythmn.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 12 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Wonderful poem! I hope whoever you wrote this of had the chance to read it... :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Debbie

    Aha, I caught you on the act of misdeed! :)

    The idea of defying the 'laws of nature' for love's triumph have somehow appealed to me. I may as well follow your example, Mr. M. Who knows? Haha. {;)

    Seriously, I liked it. Poignant to say the least. The pearl, huh. Nice.

  • 12 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent write. Such a unique topic as well, it really captured my attention!
    Beautiful words
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 12 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mr M

    What a cleaver way to praise a poem...thanks so much Tom.