Comments : Downfall

  • 16 years ago

    by xXAxTwistedxWishXx

    I love this poem n i feel the same way my boyfriend just broke up with me
    after wed been on n off for 8months
    n its hard really hard

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxcalichickxox

    Wow that was really deep...i could feel the emotion! good job i really liked it! hey cud u rate one of my poems plz? xoxxoxxox

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Okay Its offical...I love your poems...

    Fake a smile, fake a laugh
    Hide your pain and forget the past

    ^ I really liked those lines....They were a great hook....Anway...5/5....

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    Yh I agree with TwiztidJuggalette, I have read all your poems and they just get better! I love this to pieces, ur definatly a fav poet! 5/5 for all your poems! XD
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by XxTwisteDxxMinDxX

    You're absolutly FABULUOS!!! youre so defined when expressing youre pain.... but i promise... no guy is worth your misery

  • 16 years ago

    by boo

    Aww that was a good poem! ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I really liked this one ^_^ I totally understand the emotions behind this and have come close to choosing that path =p I'm glad I didn't because he isn't worth it ^_^ 5/5
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by DepthofPassion

    This is really good...I normally dont like "cutting" poems..but this is good.keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia

    Your way with words is completely amazing. I felt my heart tug with every line. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by bryan

    Very good poem, full of emotion and very good imagry. i liked it alot