Tis a very good poem mandy, absolutely love story line of this one and the ending stanza was perfect, i give it a flawless 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

I liked those poem...It was written so good...The vocab was incredible...And the flow was flawlessly throughout the poem...

5/5.... =)

Wow, this poem flowed so well. It was very nicely penned and great word choice. I loved the story to it as well. 5/5

marcella

This was beautiful, I can picture the girl picking up the clothes and like taking one last look and moving on with life. Lol. But that just means you wrote a great poem! Your flow was amazing and overall was a great peice with a great meaning!
5/5
((Amber))

Wow. this was an amazing piece. the way you expressed this idea was just great. 5/5

Beautiful!!!!!!!
i don't even know where to start!
first of all, i love how you switched from thoughts to narrative speaking, it just made the poem that much better!
the rhyming was wonderful... the flow was flawless!
i love it!
5/5

~Sandra

I LOVE THIS!!!!!...just, the contrast between lovers and liars and how you..kind of put them in their own group is incredible, and absolutely true, wow, amazing work

Wow. This has to be one of your best pieces yet. I love this poem so much. The detail it was expressed with, made it so real. And the story, very original and creative. Loved it. Never stop writing. 5/5

` Liz =]

It was a very beautiful poem =) The 1st stanza really grabbed my attention and I like the way you drag the reader into the story, well done.

I also love the title of this poem that is what caught my eye and I just had to read this poem.

I love this, the way you portrayed this poem was amazing...couldn`t have written it better myself...of course I couldn`t..not when it comes to your poems >.< Lol...I don`t know what else to say :[ . I really love this poem though, keep it up Dear.

5.5
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heartchuu.