I hate when a guy says lets just be friends.I love this poem though!Written beautifully!5/5

Wow this is really good its soo sad i know what its like to lose friends but you captured the words perfectly keep it up

laura

This is a really cute poem i think imma have my friend ashley read this..she is going through this exact problem..dont worry i will have your name on it lol...your a great writter!

Are you kidding! This poem's flow is excellent! 5/5

I thought that this was a very well written poem and the emotions were good and you wrote about something that alot of people can relate to, 5/5

First line, second stanza, it should be were instead of was. The emotion is greatly expressed though. so 5/5

marcella

Very honest emotion flows straight from the heart

The emotion is powerful :]

This piece is powerful and sad...i hate when guys say lets be friends...your emotions were definently expressed beautifully. keep it up hun!

MickeysBabyGurl

All i can say is that you have putted a lot of your emotions in this one and i really appreciate it 'coz i can feel the vivid emotions, such as the gloom and torment that you're bearing.. but honestly, this poem will look more beautiful if you just make the flow and the setting more fix though i can get the point and i can see the picture in it (but not so clear).. good work!! hope i didn't offend you.

I liked how you added the note on bottom, sometimes its crucial to realize that poems aren't being written to be perfect but instead they're being written out of need. This is what makes poem like these so pure because they're so heartfelt and created out of pure emotion.

It was really good, I'm glad you put that at the bottom, it doesn't need to be perfect, just get out how you feel because you need to.

"there was a time you held my hand,
helping me get through life.
but now you are nothing but rude,
and tell me i have no life."

That was the only thing that you used life twice, but it was really good, you don't need to perfect it. it was great.