Awww good poem keep up the good work xxx

Beautiful poem... it speaks of great loss and is quite descriptive. I cant wait to read more...

Chaotic

Last i checked, Aymee has not passed. Unless I have read your words wrong, gods know I have many times before. I know not why I leave a message here... Oh well, its not as if it matters, perhaps I am merely returning the favor from the one you left me. And My eyes never atop with words... regardless of who has Scattered them there

Aww really sad poem. but really good. =]] 5/5

amandaxx. rawr! =]]