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New poems with new writing style, nigga.

Loving it like every poem you write.
don't get the title, but never do.

Its always refreshing to see when the title is no where to be found through the entirety of the poem...it makes it unique and idk, ive just always loved it...amazing work, keep it up

...guessing the title is where it was written?...

I found myself wishing there were some spaces between some groups of lines.. ....helps to better See the poetry that way...l.Caffeine will tend to contribute to run on phrasing......

Otherwise....my favorite moment:

"they say the warm summer heat isn't something that
keeping a cool head can beat,
but don't discount the old winter winds.
and all the cold shoulders the slightest draft lets in"

all in all...a wonderfully evocative rant....