I like the use of personification in this beautiful poem, I like the message in this piece, well done. I think it flowed well, keep up the good work!

Caught me speechless? yeah u did! i don't know what to say...it was simple and yet u just caught the feelings of most women who were having the same exprience and honestly speaking you did captured mine on this.. i like the simplicity, just keep it that way. keep it up!

This one I really enjoyed reading. The flow was quite wonderful as well as the concept of the piece. Each line is really beautiful. I think thisis a fav of yours for me. 5/5

marcella