Oh i liked that one it was really good. 5/5 excellent job

Brilliant,,loved it.. another great one.

~Wake~

Wow i taht was a sad poem and unique loved it 5/5

I thought this was excellent. The words cut through me. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Brit

Interesting poem, it is very emotional and beautifully written. I like the atmosphere that you created. Every stanza is very touching. 5/5

Please look into my eyes
tell me what you see
put yourself in my place
and trade places with me.

Feel pain that never ends
try to wear a pretty smile
take a walk in my shoes
and walk a country mile.

cool stanzas

Tracy bro you wrote an amazing poem
keep it up
5/5 for it
tc

I loveed this one i guess i always passed it up but i loved it me all over the place i feel like you wrote it for me well loves

Thanks for voeting on my piece i didnt think i was much so thnks oh and the pome was good it has a very deep meaning

Sadly this is a story that so many children of today know. A story my own family knows. Beautiful write! What an inspiration!

Wow! i love this poem! :)