And sometimes you cannot sit
and watch the world go by
assuming all is fate
and all is meant to be
sometimes you have to grab
and hold tightly
so this God will not take

Hey really good poem I like it alot

That did help. Thank you for telling me to read it. I like it. I like all your poems.

And again another poem about God! xD You're a good peron.. I can feel it. To be honest.. I lost my faith to God.. But I think when I read your poems today.. I think I need to believe in him. I thank you for this beautiful poems that you've written about him.. You really inspired me - Thanks again.

I think I'm adding you to my favorites xD
Hope to read more beautiful poems by you.
Keep up the good work!

Very good poem. I loved it, even though it was somewhat sad. It shows great emotion. Good job! Keep it up! 5/5

I'm not (and never will be) a fan of poetry about religion. This, however, was well written enough to deserve a comment. I really like the way you prtray your beliefs here. The repetativeness at the start of every line made it that somewhat better. Its a nice, easy read that allows the reader to see into the writers mind.

Anything that allows you so freely to see someone elses thoughts for me is deserving of praise.

Job very well done.